A lot of money is spent on repairing old building. Instead of repairing old buildings that money should be spent on knocking down old buildings and building new ones. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

In recent days, people
has been spending
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have been spending
huge amount
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huge amounts
a huge amount
of money by their old
buildings whereas
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buildings, whereas
some others are believing that
this
money should be invested to rebuild those existing
structure
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structures
from the scratch as a new
one
. I think, if a little changes can assure that the building will be sustainable for a long
time
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time, then
then
it is less-money-wasting decision and
it
it is
it's
not,
then
people should go for reconstruction. Repair buildings- the term makes sense when the existing building requires some small changes
in it
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in, its
in its
like- upgrading sewerage system, door-locks, window and ventilator style or changing the pattern of the roof floor
from
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of
mosaic
to
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of
tiles or whatever related
with
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to
minor improvements. In these particular cases, my opinion is, not to re-structure the existing
one
as a newer
one
might be possible to make it in a comparatively low costing. In fact, we can consult and be sure about the overall condition of the building with developers and architects whether the repairing is enough or not for a long run as well.
On the other hand
, when we take plan for changing interiors, exteriors, room distributions and almost everything, if the overall look seems backdated, walls getting distempered and cracked,
then
we must go
for
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to
rebuilding
the older
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the old
one
from the root again. On the top of that, if developers ensure the current situation is not well-sustaining and might be in a structural risk,
then
rebuilding the current
one
is obvious. I am currently living in a home built by my grandfather and saw my father has repaired
this
building on various occasions
withseveral
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with several
concerns. Despite of having the sentimental attachment with the design is now,
this
is the time to build it again with a strong modernized¬¬ structure for our safety and security. It has been more than sixty years ago when it was built.
One
of my architect
friend
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friends
suggested to
do
engage in
make
this
change immediately after checking our home the condition is no more to go
with
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to
further
repairing on it. In conclusion, spending money in an efficient way by understanding the condition of the old buildings weather these need to repair or rebuild would be the wisest way at least to accumulate the excessive waste on it.

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