Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Presently the society lives in the uncertain world there every single day happen different situations, thereby people divided into two camps: while
first
’s give in under pressure difficulties, another’s try their
trouble
turn into something good.
Hence
, I think we should fight with bad circumstances, even
then
it seem impossible. Since people live in turbulent times, as
such
trouble
inevitable and society is exhausted each day reacting to them.
Accordingly
, many people accept and attempt to find something positive in a situation that they have.
For example
, if an unsatisfactory job there perhaps is a positive side high wage, if cut salary somebody gets close with collaborators and kind of like friends.
Moreover
, some global circumstances push people to give in because in their city or even in all the country same problem.
For instance
, the financial crisis that happened around the world increased level unemployment and cut salary,
therefore
people did not change even terrible job.
However
, some people become aware of the issues and in all effort try changing it.
For example
, if work completely not fit worker
then
they change profession by are finishing some courses or even a
second
university.
Besides
, if
trouble
Suggestion
the trouble
is not fatal disease people eventually can figure out a solution.
Therefore
, society is better fight with bad circumstance than live with them and suffer because it could lead to even mental disease
such
as depression. To conclude, I believe all
trouble
eventually we can solve and live with it worthless,
therefore
is better in the all efforts change bad circumstances.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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