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In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?

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It is quite common these days to see advertisements everywhere, either on TV,
mobile, websites
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websites, mobile,
mobile websites,
 or even on the streets. It is hard to get away from all these enormous bulk of commercial ads. Attracting more customers is the reason behind that, and it has been achieved by noticing how people become crazy about the term shopping nowadays. In
this
 essay, I will discuss how shopping
become
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becomes
 an enjoyable habit, and it is not nearly as regular as before.
Moreover
, I will draw my
personnel
a short newspaper article about a particular person or group
personal
 conclusion regarding
this
 trend. No doubt that the word "shopping" mainly accompanies by the female. It has been proven by many studies and researches that buying stuff helps women to relax and feel satisfied. So, shopping by itself can be a cure for females, and we can’t consider shopping as a regular
task
 if it could be worked as a pleasant outing. Another quiet equal point that would be helped in
this
 argument is, shopping could be a source of income. Personnel
shoppers and
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shoppers, and
 bloggers depend on shopping as a job, and they have insightful skills in the shopping field that allow them to find the perfect offers for their customers and followers.
working
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Working
 as a shopper can't be a routine at all.
On the other hand
, doing regular shopping and buying the essential needs
for
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of
 our daily life is an easy and fast
task
. It can be done in less than an hour. Certainly, we can't consider the term shopping as a basic
task
, it is
broad
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broader
 and more fun term. To sum up, I think shopping is a really an interesting
task
 and I agree with the trend of treating shopping as a hobby. The old perspective about
this
task
 as a routine one is not aligned with the present life. People now do
shopping
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the shopping
 for satisfaction and relaxation.
Furthermore
, they even
doing
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do
 it as a work, and a source for money.
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