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Some people think that International students exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students.Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages?

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Many people are of the opinion that
International student
Suggestion
the International student exchange
exchange
 has more benefits for the young school going teens. I think its advantages are far more
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 it's drawbacks. There are many beneficial outcomes and one of the most significant among them is that the
exchange
 program leads to students becoming independent.
For instance
, as they are away from their families, the responsibility of fulfilling their needs
such
 as food, accommodation, travel, safety, will fall on their shoulders.
In other words
, they start doing things all by themselves,
besides
 learning how to live in a new place.
Secondly
, students will learn a new culture and experience different aspects of that particular country,
such
 as trying out new cuisine, making
new friend
Suggestion
new friends
, getting into popular sporting activities of the place, and generally helping them become well rounded individuals.
For example
, I have noticed many
exchange
 students perform far better than the local students in academics. The reason could possibly be an easier curriculum or better adaptability.
Thirdly
, student
exchange
 programs make the teenagers more confident, as they get to meet students of different nationalities, specifically by trying to get into diverse groups, they become accommodating, flexible and adjusting, which leads to the general growth of their personalities. As far as disadvantages are concerned, the
exchange
 students being young could find themselves in trouble, as they are not familiar with the surroundings and the nature of the people around them. Another possible disadvantage could be that in some specific countries students may face racial discrimination.
However
,
such
 incidences are rare. To sum-up, in my view, there are more advantages,
such
 as an increase in confidence levels and
also
 becoming more independent, than drawbacks.
Hence
, student
exchange
 programs should be continued for the betterment of the youth
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