Nowadays for many people internet is replacing books.  What do you think will happen in future? And what is your opinion?

I think it is an outrage as to whether highly-intelligent workers
such
as doctors, nurses and teachers should be paid more money than soccer players and tennis players,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
whose jobs involve less extensive knowledge. In my opinion, I disagree with
this
statement as I think that doctors, nurses and teachers should get paid more, here are my reasons The
first
reason is that they have to spend many years studying and researching in level three
education
Suggestion
educations
.
For example
, to become a real professional practitioner in countries, a medical student is supposed to study diligently 6 years in a row,
then
they must accomplish more than 3 years of doing research in order to obtain master degrees. The
second
reason is that doctors and nurses face dangerous
diseases
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diseases, for
for example
the COVID-19. Sport professionals don’t face that much danger, doctors are putting their life in front of yours and saving lives. Sport professionals are just people that have good skill with
sport
Suggestion
the sport
a sport
they might not be good problem solvers and might freak out if something happens.

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