You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Environmental issues are remained as
main challenge
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the main challenge
to most of the countries. Some believed that governments and organizations are the only
one
can make an improvement
instead
of individuals.
However
, in my opinion, I think everyone is responsible for protecting our
environment
.  When a company valued profit more than protecting
environment
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the environment
, they tend to take
short cut
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a short cut
short cuts
regardless of the material whether it is polluting nature or not.
Hence
, government often plays a major role to impose strict enforcement like finds, jail and both to those
organization
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organizations
that is
harming our
environment
. In the U.K.,
for instance
, the government is committed
to pass
Suggestion
to passing
the law
that is
related to
Paris agreement
Suggestion
the Paris agreement
on 2% carbon emission by 2030. We could start to see a lot of products which claimed to conserve energy. On the other hands, Individual should take up the responsibility by buying less unwanted stuffs and give the waste a
second
life. According to a study, experts commented that most of the products we purchased end up in landfills after just
single use
Suggestion
a single use
. Bringing back a broken leg chair to a nearby shop to repair could save more than buying a new
one
, and
this
will bring a huge difference to the
environment
.
Besides
that, when we go shopping, be mindful
on
Suggestion
of
about
what we need and what we want
instead
of
one
simply purchase all the
unnecessities
the condition of being essential or indispensable
necessities
, make a shopping list, and we should check our house what are we lack of before we the shopping list. Everybody should work together to save guard the issues on ever changing rising sea level, temperature, and waste. I believe, both parties are equally important to protect our only
one
earth before it is too late.
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