Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?

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At the present, there are many extreme activities to choose. Some people might think that those activities would be too harmful and don't understand the reasons why they still do those adventure activities. In my view, I believe that they might have a reason to do those activities for getting away their boring lives.
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, I seem to disagree that extreme activities are good trends.
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with, people doing extreme activities might want to get away from their routine habits. They might be exhausted from their stressful working
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of competitive workplace. So they need some activities to stress out their work.
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century have many entertainments to serve
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as social media, online streaming or video games. Those entertainments may not help some people to relieve their pressure.
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, extreme activities would help people close to nature. Most of those activities require people to be in those places
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as forests, mountains, or oceans. Those places have a peaceful environment which would help them relax.
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, Trail running becomes a popular activity for Thai office men and women. They are more likely to attend those events rather than going to gyms because they feel that they would enjoy their scenic view while they are running.
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, they could have a fresh air in natural place compared with air in polluted cities. Even thought those activities may become a more attractive choice for people, there is some drawback on
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trend as well. Safety should be the
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priority to those adventure activities,
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, some people might neglect to strictly follow those instructions. They are not aware of the risks which they might get injuries or even died from those careless minds.
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, Diving scuba is one of the most extreme activities in Thailand. There are many travel agents to serve those needs.
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, some of them ignore the safety concerns or requiring Diving certifications before joining the activities. There are many news reporting that Thai people get injuries from inappropriate diving activities and Thai government are now issuing the law to have more control of
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activity. To sum up, those activities might help people relaxing from their stressful life and make people enjoy their nature. But Those activities might be a bad trend because there are a great risk to safety from an
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travel agent or ignoring the safety instructions from those joiner.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Adrenaline rush
  • Thrill-seeking
  • Personal growth
  • Accomplishment
  • Resilience
  • Risk management
  • Social recognition
  • Adventurous spirit
  • Endorphins
  • Fatality
  • Risk assessment
  • Cultural phenomenon
  • Recklessness
  • Safety precautions
  • Extreme sports
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