Some people believe governments should spend money in saving languages of few speakers from dying out completely. Others think this is a waste of financial resources. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is believed by many that the government must preserve an archaic or
language
of small regions,
however
others have opposite meaning. My opinion in a full agreement with a
first
community.
This
essay explains view both of debaters from two sides: a legacy of ancestors and inevitable modification of a local
language
.
First
, saving almost a dying
language
means to keep
memory
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memories
the memory
about our ancient time, about local of traditions and rituals.
Moreover
, archaeologists throughout the time by a digging find out new fragments antique languages that had lost among centuries that help better understanding culture of ancient people now,
however
, many are lost irrevocably.
In addition
, many countries still have two languages in everyday life.
For instance
, English intertwines archaic and modern tongue plus a
little
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few
of
words
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the words
from an archaic French especially it heard in church. Another example, the Ukrainian
have
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has
exciting mix
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an exciting mix
ancient and newly of words;
however
, only in small villages.
Consequently
, we should preserve
language
for other people in the future.
Secondly
, time changes with technologies and our needs, so old words replaced by modern ones.
Moreover
, inasmuch as many families are accumulated knowledge and preserve ancient languages from a generation to a generation without
support
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the support
of
govern
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governing
; citizens could preserve languages by themselves.
In addition
, many languages of small regions
is
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are
mix
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mixed
tongues from different countries without any cultural weight, thereby spent money on it useless.
Hence
, probably better leave
this
process on people’s shoulders. In general, my opinion that saving the mother tongue case of families not government
that
is corresponded
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corresponds
to
facts
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the facts
is presented previously which should convince even opposition in my view.
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