Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however ,believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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It is generally assumed that it is the parent's responsibility to bring-up their children with all positive aspects and a few others claim, it's the duty of the academic institutes. I believe, home is the
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school for the toddler and parents need to develop good social behaviour in them. Educational institutions play a significant
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in the development of the youngster by promoting discipline, which is the foundation for any good social habits to persist.
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parents, they are more emotionally involved with their children,
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, it gets harder to inculcate discipline among them. In
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respect, schools can play a major
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, by bringing in regular order and routine.
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, learning centres can impart few significant social values
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as sharing,
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, these days, most of the families are either with a single kid or two, and are unable to make them learn the quality of sharing, which is essential to grow in the society. Being selfish and greedy leads to isolation or peer boycott by other kids. Another most important aspect of growth, which only schools can impart is to learn to accept failure, which usually parents are unable to teach their kids, they either start lecturing or much worse, criticising,
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of explaining that failure is the stepping stone for success.
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, educational centres are the best places to experience it
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hand and learn from it.
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, schools play a prominent
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in a child's life, I believe, parents play equally if not a more important part by teaching their kids moral values,
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as being truthful, and
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can be imparted by themselves, if they remain truthful at all times. As children learn what they see and imitate their family members in their social interactions with others. In my opinion, the value of time needs to be developed from a very early age, as it is crucial to achieve anything in life.
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, organizational skills
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can be taught by parents in getting their kids to make their beds, keep their surroundings in an orderly fashion,
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to have their books and stationary organized.
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ability if learnt earlier will help them in the future in a big way. To conclude,
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, the school emphasizes and promotes certain aspects of life, parents play a greater
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in the personality development of their children by teaching moral, family, social values, which are the foundation of a good society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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