The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2003, and projections for 2050.

The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2003, and projections for 2050.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of
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the global
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population
in four nations in two years 1950 and 2002, and
also
predictions for 2050.
It is clear that
while
the
percentages
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of
population
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the population
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in India increases, the reverse is true for the other countries over the period shown.
Additionally
,
China
and India have
highest
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proportions of
population
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the population
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,
whereas
the figure for
Japan
is by far
lowest
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during the research period. In 1950,
China
was the most populous nation with the figure registering around 23%,
while
the Indian
population
accounted for 15% of
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the world
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population
.
In contrast
, about 7% of people in the world were from the USA, compared to only less than 5% from
Japan
. In 2002, the rate of
Indian
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the Indian
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population
rose slowly,
while
China
, the US and
Japan
all saw declines in their figures. In 2050, India is predicted to have the largest
population
as illustrated by an increase
to
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nearly 20%.
By contrast
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in
China
and
Japan
are projected to decrease to 15% and about 2% respectively. Meanwhile, the figure for the USA is likely to remain the same, at 5%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, china, japan with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • percentage
  • total world population
  • countries
  • 1950
  • 2003
  • projections
  • 2050
  • comparison
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • stable
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