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The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2003, and projections for 2050.

The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2003, and projections for 2050.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of
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the global
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population
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 in four nations in two years 1950 and 2002, and
also
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 predictions for 2050.
It is clear that
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while
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 the
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percentage
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 of
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population
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the population
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 in India increases, the reverse is true for the other countries over the period shown.
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,
China
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 and India have
highest
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the highest
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 proportions of
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population
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the population
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,
whereas
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 the figure for
Japan
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 is by far
lowest
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the lowest
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 during the research period. In 1950,
China
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 was the most populous nation with the figure registering around 23%,
while
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 the Indian
population
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 accounted for 15% of
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the world
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population
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.
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, about 7% of people in the world were from the USA, compared to only less than 5% from
Japan
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. In 2002, the rate of
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the Indian
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population
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 rose slowly,
while
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China
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, the US and
Japan
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 all saw declines in their figures. In 2050, India is predicted to have the largest
population
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 as illustrated by an increase
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 nearly 20%.
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, the proportions of
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population
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the population
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 in
China
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 and
Japan
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 are projected to decrease to 15% and about 2% respectively. Meanwhile, the figure for the USA is likely to remain the same, at 5%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, china, japan with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • percentage
  • total world population
  • countries
  • 1950
  • 2003
  • projections
  • 2050
  • comparison
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • stable
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