soem people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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have the suitable knowledge to deal and understand with those
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. A good example is, as a biomedical scientist working in the scientific research, I used to
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with other people and friends about my department and quite frequently people were arguing for
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that may some of them did not understand in deep the importance of those
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, as I said above working in a scientific area, sometimes I do not expect from my close people to understand some of the key parts of
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for a better scientific, business and academic world.
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