Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

on
Suggestion
On
the one hand, many think it is easier for students to understand if they
study
with others in a group
.
Accept space
.
Firstly
, while
studyung
reading carefully with intent to remember
studying
standing
in
group
Suggestion
a group
groups
,
Accept space
,
they
dont
do not
don't
feel bored and learn things in
playful manner
Suggestion
a playful manner
with
intrest
a sense of concern with and curiosity about someone or something
interest
.
Secondly
.
Accept space
.
group
Suggestion
Group
study
is
good flow
Suggestion
a good flow
of experience and
experties
skillfulness by virtue of possessing special knowledge
expertise
.
In other words
, in a
gropu
any number of entities (members) considered as a unit
group
some students are good in
englisg
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
and and
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
some are in maths they can help each other to make these concepts clear to
weak
Suggestion
weaker
students.
On the other hand
,
Accept space
,
studying alone by themselves is considered as a better option
,
Accept space
,
according to some
.
Accept space
.
For them there
is
Suggestion
are
less
cahnces
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
chances
chance
of
distranction
mental turmoil
distraction
destruction
because students can concentrate fully
oon
located at or attached to
on
in
his subject.
sometimes
Suggestion
Sometimes
it is clearly seen that some students are of uninterested students destroy the whole
deccorum
propriety in manners and conduct
decorum
study
bt
introduces something in contrast or unexpected
but
by
both
their disruptive behaviour.
secondl
Suggestion
Secondly
Second l
Second
Secondl
Seconds
, by
studu
be a student; follow a course of study; be enrolled at an institute of learning
study
alone a person can learn things on their pave.
some
Suggestion
Some
students are quick in learning while others are slow.
thats
Suggestion
That's
Thats
why
,
Accept space
,
lea person can learn and concentrate better if he
study
bt
Used in specifying adjacent dimensions
by
himself,
in
Suggestion
In
conclusin
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • collaborative learning
  • peer feedback
  • social interaction
  • deep understanding
  • group dynamics
  • personalized learning
  • self-discipline
  • concentration
  • diverse perspectives
  • isolation
  • motivation
  • peer support
  • groupthink
  • distractions
  • commitment
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