Students should be primarily taught academic subjects so that they can pass exams, and practical skills such as cooking should not be taught. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The education system witnessed dramatic changes during the past century. There is a common belief that schools should focus more on academic subjects and less on the practical skills of a student. I fully disagree with

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opinion and I think that children should be taught basic skills

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cooking at schools. I will support my stand with valid arguments in the following paragraphs. There is no doubt that academic subjects

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as mathematics and science should be given more importance in the

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curriculum. These subjects help children develop logic and understand the world around them.

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, academic knowledge is a good basis for a future career.

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, not every student will pursue a career in science and each of them will need to cook at some stage of their life.

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, after graduation from

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, many students move out of their parents’ house and start living on their own. Those In

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situations, those young people who have never even fried an egg face serious difficulties. Had they learned cooking at

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,

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could have been avoided. Cooking is not only a survival

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skill, but

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) fundamental for health and wellbeing. According to research, the people who know cooking and practice it on a daily basis have

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a lower risk

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of diabetes and colon cancer than the people who do not know how to cook and prefer to eat fast food. Children should learn how to prepare healthy and nutritious meal for themselves and the

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should help them

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gain

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skill. Every

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should have classes where children have an opportunity to learn simple recipes and under the teacher’s supervision. From my personal experience, I learned how to make soup at

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and I appreciate

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experience because it helps me now. In conclusion, I believe that the

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should take the responsibility to educate children on some practical activities

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as food preparation.

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academic knowledge is absolutely necessary for a modern human being, cooking is a survival skill and a protective factor against some health issues.