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Telivision has diminished the free time of people.It can make people lazy and not socialize with others. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is well-known that
television
 is a source of information and it provides information to the individuals around the globe.
Nonetheless
, people waste their valuable
time
to watch
Suggestion
watching
television
instead
 of exploring the outside
world
.
This
 essay will discuss the reasons why I
am partially agree
Suggestion
partially agree
 with the preposition. At the outset, there are a
myraid
too numerous to be counted
myriad
 of reasons that
television
 spoil the leisure
time
 of individuals and they
beome
enter or assume a certain state or condition
become
lazy
Suggestion
lazier
 rather than going out in the community. The most conspicuous one is that nowadays people are becoming individualistic and they prefer to spend their free
time
 just watching
television
 and mobile phones. Because of
this
 they do not do
excercise
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
 and any physical activity to keep their
bosy
the entire structure of an organism (an animal, plant, or human being)
body
 fit.
As a result
, they might have to suffer from various health diseases and being overweight is one of them.
For instance
, In the US, children spend most of their
time
 on
television
 and tabs to watch cartoons and 60% of children are obese for not doing physical exercises.
On the other hand
 side,
television
 is a great mode of relaxation. As people spend their leisure
time
 to get information about what is happening
aroud
in the area or vicinity
around
 the
world
 from news and listen songs, and watch movies.
This
 would help them to increase their knowledge and it connects individuals to the whole
world
. People watch entertainment
pprograms
a series of steps to be carried out or goals to be accomplished
programs
programmes
programme
 with their family members which provides them a great sense of relief from their work. In conclusion,
this
 essay discussed the reasons why I
am not entirely in the favor of
Suggestion
am entirely in the favour of television not diminished
am not entirely in the favour of television dimishes
am entirely in the favour of television not diminishing
don't entirely in the favour of television diminish
am not entirely in the favor of television diminishes
am not entirely in the favour of television diminishes
television
 dimishes the free
time
 of individuals.
Although
 because of
television
 people do not prefer for becoming
socialize
Suggestion
socialized
 in the society, but it develops individual's knowledge by seeing the whole
world
 just sitting at one place.

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