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Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples form you knowledge or experience.

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The greatest political advantage of using nuclear
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 is the fact that it leads to a significant reduction of dependence on oil. Oil is produced in very few countries around the world and
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 has created a lot of interest and competition.
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 is indeed true
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 the political crisis that seems never to end in the Middle East. Nuclear fuel is cheaper and can be sourced from more stable regions of the world.
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, nuclear
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 can indeed free many countries from oil dependence (Sovacool 376). Conclusion
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 paper sought to reaffirm that nuclear
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 provides cheap and clean energy. Its advantages far outweigh its disadvantages. Indeed, it has been identified that nuclear
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 is much cheaper, causes the least effect on
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 and reduces dependence on other countries producing oil. Though it has some serious risks, the efforts that are currently in place have reduced them considerably.
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