The table below shows the television viewing figure for sports, in millions.

The table below shows the television viewing figure for sports, in millions.
The table shows the number of
people
in millions who watch
sports
on
television
. It shows the number of viewers for four
sports
in four different countries. The table shows that more American
people
watch
sports
on
television
than the other three nationalities. In all four
countries
Add a comma
,countries
show examples
tennis is the most popular sport on
television
. The total number of viewers for tennis is nearly 26 million and in each country about 6-7 million
people
watch it. Not many
people
like watching motor racing on
television
compared to
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
other
sports
. In the USA and
Canada
Add a comma
,Canada
show examples
only 1-1.5 million
people
watch motor racing, but it is more popular in the UK and Australia. Golf is very popular in the USA with
11million
Correct your spelling
11 million
viewers, but it is not as popular in
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
other countries.
Submitted by tukhtakulov98 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Add some linking words.
Linking words: Add linking words.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, sports, television with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: