The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

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who

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routine physical

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in six different

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groups in 2010.

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regular physical

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in the given’s diagram period. The

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of middle

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female groups who did physical

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were the most,

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the less physical

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of male was from 35 to 44 ages. In the youngest

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(15 to 24), the

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of exercising daily

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the male

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was higher than

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by 5,1 %.

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of 25 to 34, the

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of routine physical

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lower

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than

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by 6,7%,

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35 to 44 to 39,5% and 52,5%, respectively. In the 45 to 54

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group, the

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of doing exercise daily of female continued higher than

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by 10,2%. Between the

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45 and 54 shared the same trend, with the

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were 45,1% and 53%, respectively.

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, the

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of Australian

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and

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who did physical

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were

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about the same, with the

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of exercising regularly of

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higher than

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by 0,4%.