The diagram below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called salmon
The diagram
which
illustrates Correct pronoun usage
apply
processes
of Correct article usage
the processes
life
cycle of a species of large fish named the Add an article
the life
salmon
.
The first step is
that,
the Remove the comma
apply
salmon
start his
life as Correct pronoun usage
its
a
egg under the reeds Change the article
an
approximately
five to six months in Change preposition
for approximately
a
upper river with a Change the article
an
slow moving
. And Add a hyphen
slow-moving
then
when they became a
fry with Correct article usage
apply
measure
between three and eight Add an article
a measure
centimeters
in length they Change the spelling
centimetres
are go
to the lower river in a fast flowing approximately for 4 years.
Change the verb form
are going
Subsequently
the fry became smolt and with a 12-15cm in Add a comma
,Subsequently
length
they reach during Add a comma
,length
this
time after which migrated to the open sea and there they habited about five years. After five years they reached to
Change preposition
apply
the
adult size Correct article usage
apply
it
means adult Correct pronoun usage
which
salmon
from 70 to 76cm.
In conclusion, the salmon
passed through three areas and the process of becoming mature. Each of
habitat place Change preposition
apply
take
place in Change the verb form
takes
different
aquatic location.Correct article usage
a different
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