The diagram below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called salmon

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called salmon
The diagram
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illustrates
processes
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the processes
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of
life
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cycle of a species of large fish named the
salmon
.
The first step is
that
,
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the
salmon
start
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its
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life as
a
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egg under the reeds
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five to six months in
a
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upper river with a
slow moving
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. And
then
when they became
a
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fry with
measure
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a measure
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between three and eight
centimeters
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in length they
are go
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to the lower river in a fast flowing approximately for 4 years.
Subsequently
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the fry became smolt and with a 12-15cm in
length
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they reach during
this
time after which migrated to the open sea and there they habited about five years. After five years they reached
to
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the
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adult size
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means adult
salmon
from 70 to 76cm. In conclusion, the
salmon
passed through three areas and the process of becoming mature. Each
of
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habitat place
take
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place in
different
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a different
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aquatic location.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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