The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in London 2000-2010

The line graph illustrates the

trend

of profit in

Sofia

,

Cake

lab

and Buns in London over the first

10-years

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10 years

from 2000. In General.At the beginning of year two

bakeries

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trend

was shown

a

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few results;

however

,

at the end

of

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a steeply boomed,

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the revenue of Buns declares an enormous fall in 2010. In

group

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of

Sofia

's production,

sale

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average quantity

of

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over

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5-years

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5 years

nearly

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60.000,

at

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the same

time

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Cake

Lab

's income reached

to

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bakery sharply climbed almost 2009 by 60.000.Till

this

result the

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showed a slight fluctuation once between 2002 and 2005.

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of both trends dramatically

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.

Sofia

became the most popular bakery and

a

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sharp growth income

by

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almost 40.000 at 100.000 in 2010 compared to

Cake

Lab

a steep increase from 40.000

next

about 25.000

accordingly

. With regard to Buns in beginning year was a record high

by

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annual

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profit

nearly

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80.000

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with

Sofia

and

Cake

Lab

.

However

, the number of

trend

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presents more oscillations from 2000 to 2007.

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the bakery dramatically falls off in 2010 approximately 37.000.