IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 7

Nowadays congestion and traffic jams are a common and major problem in most cities. Some people believe it is a good idea to construct wider roads to resolve this issue. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? What can be the solution, in your opinion?

#congestion #traffic #jams #cities #people #idea #roads
In urban centres around the world, a great deal of time is wasted daily due to transportation jams.
This
 is a serious issue because it affects people’s livelihoods and mental health.
This
 essay will consider the main causes of traffic congestion, before proposing two possible solutions. The most important cause of traffic problems in cities is a lack of public transport. With few alternatives, many people choose to travel by car, as it is quicker and more convenient.
As a result
, traffic jams occur, particularly on popular routes
such
 as main roads. Another key factor is uniform working hours across the city. The majority of people start and finish work or school at a similar time.
This
 means that road becomes extremely congested at certain times of day,
for instance
, at “rush hour” in the morning and evening. Fortunately,
however
, there are two promising solutions to
this
 problem.
First
 of all, local governments should invest more in public transportation.
This
 would make
this
 option more attractive and reduce the number of cars on the road.
For example
, in my hometown , the council has created a network of cycle paths which encourage people to cycle to work.
Secondly
, the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
 could introduce different working hours for schools and public facilities, which would
further
 cut down the number of commuters travelling at particular times. In conclusion, congestion is a serious problem which is primarily caused by limited public transportation options, along with the shared working schedule of many urban dwellers. I recommend that governments address
this
 issue by investing in public transport infrastructure, and implementing varied working hours in public facilities.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • congestion
  • traffic jams
  • urban sprawl
  • induced demand
  • public transportation
  • sustainable
  • urban planning
  • walkability
  • infrastructure
  • smart traffic management
  • ride-sharing
  • environmental impact
  • comprehensive strategies
  • carpooling
  • green solutions
What to do next:
Look at other essays: