The planet's population is reaching unsustainable levels, and people are facing shortage of resources like water, food and fuel. To what consequences may overpopulation lead? In your opinion, what measures can be taken to fight overpopulation?

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has become a major concern, resulting in several debates and facts that

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a substance that can be consumed to produce energy

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may lead while solutions of these will be followed as measurements. It is the truth that the population in the world h

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has been increasing

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massively over a few decades. It could be seen as a negative trend. When

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ccurs people

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the global range

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probably happens

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could be treated by some measurements provided.

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, movements of preventing

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should be i

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intensified

in order to give people more information of dangerous if

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happens and spread it to all community levels, generate events that concern t

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, the government could create a law to enforce people to limit their birth to the level that easily m

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probably the biggest concern nowadays and it could be drawback trend,

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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