Today, TV channels provide men’s sport shows more than women’s sport shows. Why? Should TV channels give equal time for women’s sport and men’s sport?

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Nowadays

sport

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shows

a particular situation

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for men are accounting for most of the streaming time on

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than female’s. In my opinion,

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channel should give more episodes for

women’s

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a women’s sport show

women’s sport shows

sport

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show to enhance women’s health. Men’s sports are prioritized because of two main reasons.

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of all, most of the well-known

sport

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competitions are men only,

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as: The World’s Cup, the Champion League, etc.

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attract the attention and

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

the demand of the audiences.

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, it is due to the commercial purposes. The dominance of men’s sports broadcasting is,

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, a wise strategy to earn profits and attract sponsors from the investors.

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producers should create more opportunities for female

sport

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programs due to the two main reasons.

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of all, it is

such

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a great inspiration for women to do sports more regularly.

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women

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women's

athletics could have

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a chance

the chance

to contribute their talents to the variety of their country’s sports. In conclusion,

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networks have been arranged unequal time between female and male sports;

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, they should give more chances for women due to its long-term benefit on

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women's

health and the variety of sports.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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188 words

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Today, TV channels provide men’s sport shows more than women’s sport shows. Why? Should TV channels give equal time for women’s sport and men’s sport?

Fully explain your ideas

Nowadays more and more children are being brought up in single-parent families. What are the causes of this? What effects can be seen as a result of this?

In spite of many advances women have made in education and employment, they continue to be at a disadvantage when it comes to pay and promotion. In your view, what should be done to promote equality of opportunity for men and women in the workplace.

Write a letter to your manager to nominate a person for the best employee of the year award. Explain in your letter:  Who this person is  Why you choose him/her  What the characteristics of the good employee are

Describe a career that requires a lot of hard work, but is rewarding in the end. What is the job, and why is it rewarding despite the challenges? Give specific details to support your answer.

News editor decide what to to broadcast on television and what to print in newspaper. What factors do you think influence these dicisions? Do we bacame used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?