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More and more newspapers and news channels are using photographs to support their news articles and stories. Some people think that photographs are not a reliable source of news while others consider photographs to be irrefutable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is the matter of fact that images increase overwhelmingly in media and advertisement filed. While a number of people may think that it is barely to rely on the source of the photos in
magazine
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magazines
the magazine
a magazine
 or newspapers, some believe that using photos in
articles
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the articles
is
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are
 indispensable.
This
 essay will discuss both views and present a personal point of view. On the one hand, people think images is not the trustful source when they access the information of stories.
Firstly
, in the decade of technology, photographs are frequently modified glossily before uploaded in public coverage, which totally differ from their situation
on
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in
 fact.
For instance
, readers are effortless to catch the attractive photos of renting departments through
media but
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media, but
 it is disappointed when they double check directly.
Furthermore
, businessman
use
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uses
 designed pictures for advertising purpose. A noticeable number of celebrities have paid a massive amount of money for editing the photos of them in order to obtain their reputation. It may harmful for them if their fans realize the real images without morphing tools.
Hence
, there are several reasons driving new watchers not to believe in photos in total.
On the other hand
, I believe that adding
photographs plays
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photographs, plays
 an important role in publishing news through
medias
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
meadows
 and newspapers. It is essential to clarify the information
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on
 stories by images. Without the capture of
scene
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the scene
scenes
a scene
, people cannot understand completely the meaning which reporters want to show their audience. Plus, the producers have more opportunities to promote their revenue of products through the photos of them in advertising tools namely: national channels or public magazines. The attractive photographs are uncomplicated to lead customers to purchase, especially with the collaboration from well-known people. In conclusion,
although
 both views certainly have some validity, it seems to me that it is better to enhance the information from stories via photos and images.
Submitted by thuhien.myo.1911 on

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