Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. Others believe that international sporting events bring more problems than benefits.

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In today’s world, most of the people are involved in a particular game, they are watching different types of game

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as cricket, football and baseball.These games are played by all over countries' populations.

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, some people thinking,

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things are not important, because the international sporting

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is coming with more problems.Before commenting on giving statement,

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will discuss about the both of point of view in following paragraphs. In the recent survey based on worldwide and found that, almost all countries are organizing 5 to 7 international sports events in one year, because of public demand and for some business.While particular country is host one international sport,

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country

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also introduce

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also introduces

their culture, hand arts and other related programs and country humans are earning some money from sporting

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as a business selling food and flakes, hand made products and other related things.

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, if countries are organising an international

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, due to which point countries ate more popular in the world.

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, they make more job opportunity,

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things are more important for society and the individual.

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, some people defend that given statement,

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they do not aware about the advantages of international sporting

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. They are watching only one

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and only disadvantages.They think, while international

sports conducting

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sports, conducting

by their countries, at that time some foreign people are coming into their countries with their culture, as the reason they believe

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thing are not important.

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, some people fear fir international diseases, because they think international sportsmen and sportswomen are coming with medical problems. To sum up the discussion, each and every coin has two

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sides

, in my opinion international sporting is important for countries' development and

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things are increasing GDP.On the other

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, those people are thinking,

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things are coming with problems, in my view, government are conducting some programs and teach about advantages for

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event

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the event

an event

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

317 words

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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