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People often find difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives.Why do you think this is? What measures can you suggest to make it easier?

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Introduction
A popular belief is that changing situations are difficult to get used to for most of the people. It may be
result
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the result
a result
 of the family
life
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,
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,
character or resistance to new situations and I believe with some steps
,
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,
you can adapt more easily than before.
Body paragraph 1
Firstly
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, some people
do not want
Suggestion
does not want
 to change because of the lifestyle
that is
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 really monotone.
For example
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,
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,
 these people always want to go bed at the same time
,
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,
eat at the same restaurant and meet with
same people
Suggestion
the same people
. On the one hand
,
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,
 they do not feel courageous enough to make
somthing
an unspecified thing, agency, amount, etc.
something
differently
Suggestion
different
 for the reason that they did some mistakes and its reduced their self-reliance.
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Moreover
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Moreover, this
this
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 against
behevour
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 for changing cause growing up with a family that do not like
transition
Suggestion
the transition
. A good illustration is that if your parents lived in the same place and dressed in the same style and never did different things in
their all
Suggestion
all their life,
there all life,
there there all life,
life
Use synonyms
, you
woul
past tense of "will"
would
will
 be
peacefull
not disturbed by strife or turmoil or war
peaceful
 with doing
same thing
Suggestion
the same thing
 and in small differences
,
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,
you would feel
nerveus
easily agitated
nervous
nerves
.
Body paragraph 2
It is clear that you should do something to beat your adaptation problem. I think you should improve your perspective on
life
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 with meeting new people
,
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,
reading more books and travel more.It is a good way to increase your self- reliance and you may see the changes as a good thing.
In addition
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, if you could not do by yourself
,
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,
 you could get help from
psychologist
Suggestion
a psychologist
. I strongly suggest that you should try new experiences. It can be
small thing
Suggestion
a small thing
small things
such
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 as going to the cafe that you have never been there or you should try new foods that you have never tried
.
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Conclusion
In
conculation
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
conciliation
, I believe that being able to adapt to
inovations
a creation (a new device or process) resulting from study and experimentation
innovations
innovation
 and changes gives you many advantages for your future
life
Use synonyms
.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fear of the unknown
  • Comfort zone
  • Familiar
  • Inherently uncertain
  • Challenges
  • Necessary tools
  • Skills
  • Efficiently
  • Emotional ties
  • Stress and anxiety
  • Overwhelming
  • Cultural backgrounds
  • Social backgrounds
  • Adaptable
  • Change management
  • Coping strategies
  • Resilience
  • Support network
  • Preparation
  • Flexibility
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