News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

Nowadays the editors of the news choose whatever they want to show on TV and to write on public magazines and newspapers. In my view, many factors that could affect their
choice perhaps
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choice, perhaps
the desire and passion of the
audience
is the major one. Probably the most of what these media deliver to the public are bad news and
this
news that we hear every day become the norm, and they don’t anymore affect us as they used to when we had started to listen or read them for the
first
couple of times. I think that if the trend towards using media to deliver the information had been changed to inform us about the positive news around the world, the people around the globe would feel more optimistic and would have better
health
. The most effective factor in the decision of the editors about what
news should
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news, should
they give to the
audience
is what the
audience
needs. Since the
audience
is the source of income to the editors and the more of people the better, giving them what they need can fill the
editors
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editors'
pockets with money. The more you give the
audience
what they need the more followers among them you get.
For example
, CNN channel has so many followers because they most of the times exhibit bad news
hence
a bunch of great companies
invest
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invests
in
this
channel to show their advertisements on its screen. Bad news becomes the norm of our everyday life because we listen or see them everywhere. News channels are littered with bad news, newspapers are crammed with them and the surrounding people often inform us of them.
Therefore
, we do not see them as surprising or astonishing as it should be. In my opinion, changing the content of the media to make it more positive or at least neutral in delivering the news will improve the
people
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person's
peoples'
peoples
health
. By delivering good news to the public, they will look at their lives
more positively
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more positive
and a great deal of optimism will enter their life. And since we know that the immune system is affected greatly
with
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by
the mood of the person
(
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(
good mood means a strong immune system), our immune system and
hence
our
health
will be better. To illustrate that when someone feels sad for whatever reason they perhaps immediately or after a little time will feel sick and
that is
because of the sad mood that they had experienced. In conclusion, the unnoticed desire of the public affects greatly the decisions of media makers. The bad news becomes a normal thing to hear in our lives, so they are inflicting our
health
unfeelingly.
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  • Demographics
  • Engagement
  • Relevance
  • Urgency
  • Natural disasters
  • Political upheavals
  • Public health concerns
  • Advertising revenue
  • Sponsorship deals
  • Market competition
  • Editorial policies
  • Censorship
  • Newsworthy
  • Desensitization
  • Bad news fatigue
  • Negativity bias
  • Balanced view
  • Social media
  • Viral content
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