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The car is a disastrous 20th Century invention that has made the world’s cities more dangerous and polluted, as well as being responsible for the deaths of millions of people in accidents. Do you agree or disagree?

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There are widely differing views on the issue of whether the
car
 is a disastrous invention or not. Some people would say that it is an outstanding discovery, because we can mobile faster and revolutionize our transportation;
however
, I personally believe that
car
 is a disastrous invention. The reason
are
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is
 two folds. One point which I believe to be absolutely pivotal is the fact that the
car
 is responsible for the increasing
number
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amount
 of air pollution in the city. In
US
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the US, for
the US for
for example
, after World War II, economic and population growth, rapid
suburbanization
, and the closing of some public transit systems led to more reliance on personal vehicles for transportation.
This
 rapid increase of motor vehicles resulting a serious impact on the environment. It is producing amounts of nitrogen oxides, carbon monoxide, and other pollution that are dangerous for the environment. Equally importantly, cars are guilty for the death of humans due to
traffic
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traffic accidents
a traffic accident
accident
. The
car
 industry has tried to respond the problem with the development of
car
 safety features (front airbags, brake assist, and others), but thousands of people still killed each year in road
accident
. It is important to tighten the law of vehicle ownership to
minimalize
 the
accident
. Admittedly, not all the features of
car
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the car
a car
 are negative -there is a helpfulness of
car
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cars
the car
, ranging from the comfortableness to the flexibility of travel.
Nonetheless
, I would contend that
this
advantageous
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advantage
 has generally been a disadvantage impact on city life because it is contributing to the overcrowding of
street
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the street
streets
. By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that the
car
 has had a negative
impact
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Impact
 on city life because of its pollution
emission discharge
Accept comma addition
emission, discharge
 and traffic
accident
.

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