Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment ; only govt and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the changing scenario
environment
problem
is burgeoning with every passing day. It is not only
problem
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problematic
in developing
countries in
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countries, in
fact developed
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fact, developed
nations are
also
victim of
this
.
Masses
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The masses
donot
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do not
able to solve
this
issue
.
Therefore it
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Therefore, it
is only solve
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is only solved
is only solving
has only solved
only solves
is only to solve
by big organisations and authorities. My inclination does not fall with
this
statement. My essay would clear all the doubts in
upcoming paragraphs
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the upcoming paragraphs
. There are numerous of way which help to reduce the
environment
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environmental
problems.
First
of all, public should
use
carpooling
and follow shearing system and due to
this
the traffic is
reduced
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reduced, then
then
the atmosphere
issue
is
also
decreased because traffic is a main crux of
pollution
.
Therefore follow
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Therefore, follow
the shearing system is helpful to
cantroll
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can troll
it
.
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.
For example
, folks who do work in a same
place
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place, then
then
they should shear their vehicles with each other and
then
it is possible to solve
this
issue
because there are less car on the road
thus
the
environment
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environmental
pollution
is reduced. The trustworthy point to be a noted here is that, nowadays mostly individuals
use
plastic made things owing to
this
environment
pollution
will be increased because plastic made things is not reused. People ought
use
3R rules
such
as reuse, reduce and recycle with the dint of
it they
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it, they
donot
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do not
face any kind of
problem
related to
environment
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the environment
.
For example
clothes bag is
use
by
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of
them
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them, then
then
the
pollution
easily removed.
Hence they
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Hence, they
should not
us
put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose
use
plastic.
However
,
government
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the government
should impose
rules regulations
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rules, regulations
to solve
environment
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environmental
problems
because owing
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because, owing
to
stickiness
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the stickiness
of authorities people are more adults be they
donot
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do not
any activity which is harmful for
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
then
government give punishment to them.
Hence they
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Hence, they
can solve
this
issue
. To conclude, in these days there are many problems
face
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faces
by
masses but
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the masses, but
the masses but
environment
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the environment
is
big
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a big issue
issue
among the people.
Although
authorities
is
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are
helpful to reduce
this
issue but
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issue, but
the implement of folks they cannot face
this
problem
because government only imposes the rules but public follow it
then
it has more optimistic.
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