The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three period and whether they were studying full-time and part-time.

The bar graph illustrates the information about the British males and females in additional study to full-time or part-time between three decades

Overall

, it can be clearly seen that

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full-time study is more popular than

part time

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education for both

men

and women. It can be observed that

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1970 to 1981, one million males studied full-time and 180000

men

studied part-time,

whereas

opposite site , females approximately 800000

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studied full-time

however

,

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studied was least that was just 150000.

In contrast

, there was full-time a steady decrease for

men

during 1980-81 that has been just above 800000,

while

female enrolment

was slightly risen

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in the same period. Part-time

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almost

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of the previous decade.

Furthermore

, full-time education

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up in 1990 to 1991 which was almost touched 1100 thousand.

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opposite

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side, males

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approximately 900 thousand

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this

decade.

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,

part -time

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education was

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both

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men

and women that were 200000 respectively throughout the decade.