Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

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Undoubtedly, the noblest goal in
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life for humans is to apply human rights. Some people think that the money just for its
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owner, but
I beg to differ. There are some poor communities (for a reason or another) need the help of rich communities. Especially in some basic fundamental things in
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life, such
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as
food
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and education, though the governments of
the poorer
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the poor
countries should do their best to achieve that. The rich countries possess an excess amount of money, which they use in needless luxury.
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luxury is definitely less important than feeding or teaching poor people.
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, in some presidential meetings, there is much
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unnecessary, expensive
food
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is served on the
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table, even
though less than 10 % of it is required. Sadly enough the rest
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is usually ended
in the litter. The extravagance that happens in many other things is uncountable.
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, the extravagant countries should pay some money
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for
the less affluent ones to help them live respectable lives.
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, the authorities of
the poor
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the poorest
poorest
the poorer
cities should
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cut its expenses from less necessary urges and employ
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cash
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in improving the standard of their own citizens.
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,
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of buying high-tech war crafts they should fetch
food
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for their people. It is evident that fighting aeroplanes bring
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death, but
food
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brings life. The local authorities
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supposed to allocate enough dollars to educate everybody and make a free compulsory system of teaching. In doing so a more educated and developed community will emerge. In conclusion, as we have seen, the due of helping the in-need communities is a common responsibility between the rich countries and their own governments.
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is considered to be one of the most significant principles of humanity and human rights.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • global stability
  • economic self-sufficiency
  • sustainable development
  • capacity-building
  • foreign aid
  • mutual benefits
  • trade relations
  • long-term outcomes
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  • moral obligation
  • alleviate poverty
  • humanitarian assistance
  • resource allocation
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