In some countries , criminal trials are shown on television for the public. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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In recent years, criminal trials have been televised in some countries to allow the public an opportunity to watch them. If asked, I tend to believe that it has

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a more fruitful outcome

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. Discussing the merits, the principle advantage is showing criminal proceeding on the television is that the entire judicial systems is open to the public to watch and supervise. While

general public

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the general public

knowing

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known

about

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established by or founded upon law or official or accepted rules

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right and crime laws. Foe example, western countries where the minor hearing to be broadcasted on TV because of the aim is reducing crime and awareness of people. Another benefit is that opening the doors of the

court room

a room in which a lawcourt sits

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allows the public rights to information.

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phenomenon affects in different ways and people gain some detail about laws.

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, judging the criminals on social media, the national police force is showing their power to the citizen.

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, the crime rate would be reduced and

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positive change will be lead people to a peaceful life.

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, there are some drawbacks of showing judicial proceeding on TV. The main disadvantage is the coverage that the criminals can turn them

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can negatively influence on

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the younger

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generation.

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, in America Simon hearing broadcast on the online

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, he is addicted to the drugs, after that drugs consumption increase. In

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conflict, governments do not have a right to show people life. In conclusion, I firmly believe that the advantages are more than

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the drawbacks

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

279 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

transparency
public oversight
judicial system
educational value
privacy concerns
re-traumatizing
juror behavior
fairness
public opinion
media sensationalism
impartiality
economic benefits
legal proceedings
misinterpretation
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In some countries , criminal trials are shown on television for the public. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Fully explain your ideas

have your experience any festival or occasion in different country ? What type of experience you have learnt from it ?

Universities should accept equal numbers of men and women in every subject. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Science is important in the 21st century. How do you think it could be made more appealing to young people?

Prevention is better than cure" Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree.