You have heard about plans to build new apartments in a public park near your home. You want to give your opinion about this. Write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper. In your letter  Explain how you learnt about these plans  Say what you think of the park  Give our opinion on the plans

Dear Sir/

Madame

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Madam

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, I want to inform you about a plan by

local

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council to build new apartments in a public park near my home.

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friday

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, on the 30th of April, my friend who works at the local council as

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overheard it

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and informed me. The park is visited by my old parents

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for a walk.

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, people of older age in the

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visit for a walk and to connect with other people. My kids visit the park during holidays for playing with other kids

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the

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, it is a perfect place for working

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like me, to relax in my leisure time. I am shocked and terrified after hearing about the plan. The plan destroys

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the ecological

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balance in the

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, memories people had during their childhood

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and weakens social bonding in the

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. All the dwellers of the

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hope that you publish

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story in your newspaper. Yours faithfully, Sashank Alladi