You have heard about plans to build new apartments in a public park near your home. You want to give your opinion about this. Write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper. In your letter  Explain how you learnt about these plans  Say what you think of the park  Give our opinion on the plans

Dear Sir/
Madame
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, I want to inform you about a plan by
local
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council to build new apartments in a public park near my home.
Last
friday
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Friday
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, on the 30th of April, my friend who works at the local council as
volunteer
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overheard it
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and informed me. The park is visited by my old parents
everyday
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for a walk.
Similarly
, people of older age in the
community
visit for a walk and to connect with other people. My kids visit the park during holidays for playing with other kids
of
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the
neighborhood
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.
In addition
, it is a perfect place for working
adult
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adults
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like me, to relax in my leisure time. I am shocked and terrified after hearing about the plan. The plan destroys
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the ecological
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balance in the
community
, memories people had during their childhood
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and weakens social bonding in the
community
. All the dwellers of the
community
hope that you publish
this
story in your newspaper. Yours faithfully, Sashank Alladi
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