The charts below show the percentages of male and female students getting top grades in 1960 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts compare the
percentages
of male and female students
getting top grades
in five subjects, which are science, arts
, maths, languages
, and humanities
in 1960 and 2000.
Overall
, the percentages
of female Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
students
receiving the highest grade decreased during the time period, while
males have the opposite trend.
In 1960, approximately 20% to 30% of males got good grades
in science, maths, languages
, and humanities
. Even so, only a tenth of male students
getting
top Wrong verb form
get
grades
in arts
. On the other hand
, its
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the
percentages
of female students
are 30%. They also
did better in language and humanities
, which made up 45% and around 32% in these subjects.
In 2000, the percentages
of male Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
students
receiving top grades
almost doubled in arts
and humanities
, whereas
the figures in science and maths decreased by half and stopped around
17%. The Change preposition
at around
percentages
of female Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
students
who got a high score
in Fix the agreement mistake
scores
arts
, languages
, and humanities
decreased significantly after 40 years, which constituted 25% for arts
and humanities
and 30% for languages
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentages, students, grades, arts, languages, humanities with synonyms.
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