The impact that growing demand for more flights has had on the environment is a major concern for many countries. Some people believe that one way to limit the number of people traveling by air is to increase taxes on flights. To what extent do you think this could solve the problem?
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technology
reaches its peak. Due to advancement in technology
, air
transportation
is introduced. It influences environment
very badly and it is a major issue for many nations. Some people opinea
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opine a
rise
in taxes on air
travelling is a good solution for reducing the number
of air
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air
travelling is a good solution for reducing the number
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this
method is not much effective. My reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.
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means are rich or belongs to the high community
. The number
of individuals from mediocre
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the mediocre class
class
are
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the number
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this
resolution is not beneficial to limit the number
of people travelling by air
.
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, the funds collected by money
due to increase in prices
of tickets and taxes on Suggestion
the prices
air
tansport
can be used for welfare of folk and improvement of move something or somebody around; usually over long distances
transport
environment
. Suggestion
the environment
This
money
should be given to scientists, so that they can research and invent eco-friendly fuels which can be used in airplanes
, and air
transportation
will become safe for environment
. Suggestion
the environment
Moreover
, this
money
can be used in planting trees specially
near the airports as tees can absorb obnoxious gases and Accept comma addition
trees, especially
trees especially
also
reduce noise
pollution
.
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tax will not influence the growing demand for more flights, but it can be useful in reducing other Suggestion
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environment
issues like deforestation, air
and noise
pollution
. to
me, Suggestion
To
this
method is not much effective. My reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.
Most of the passengers travelling by air
means are rich or belongs to the high community
. The number
of individuals from the mediocre class
is very smaller than the rich class
. If the price of tickets increases due to rise
in tax, then
it will not affect high community
, but it can be effective in reducing number
of travellers from mediocre families. Overall, there would not be large difference seen. So, Suggestion
the number
this
resolution is not beneficial to limit the number
of people travelling by air
.
Nevertheless
, the funds collected by money
due to increase price
of tickets and taxes on Suggestion
the price
air
transport can be used for welfare of folk and improvement of environment
. Suggestion
the environment
This
money
should be given to scientists, so that they can research and invent eco-friendly fuels which can be used in airplane
, and air
transportation
will become safe for environment
. Suggestion
the environment
Moreover
, this
money
can be used in planting trees, especially near the airports as tees can absorb obnoxious gases and also
reduce noise
pollution
.
Before putting my pen down, I concluded that levying more taxes will not influence the growing demand for more flights, but it can be useful in reducing other environment
issues like deforestation, air
and noise
pollution
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