The impact that growing demand for more flights has had on the environment is a major concern for many countries. Some people believe that one way to limit the number of people traveling by air is to increase taxes on flights. To what extent do you think this could solve the problem?

Today, we live in the 21st century and
technology
reaches its peak. Due to advancement in
technology
,
air
transportation
is introduced. It influences
environment
very badly and it is a major issue for many nations. Some people
opinea
express one's opinion openly and without fear or hesitation
opine
opine a
rise
in taxes on
air
travelling is a good solution for reducing the
number
of
air
passengers.
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Today
, we live in
21st century
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the 21st century
and
technology
reaches its peak. Due to advancement in
technology
,
air
transportation
is introduced. It
influence
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influences
is influenced
has influenced
environment
very badly and it is
major issue
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a major issue
for many nations. Some people opine that
rise
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a rise
in taxes on
air
travelling is a good solution for reducing the
number
of
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a mixture of gases (especially oxygen) required for breathing; the stuff that the wind consists of
air
passengers. According to me,
this
method is not much effective. My reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs. Most of the passengers travelling by
air
means are rich or belongs to the high
community
. The
number
of individuals from
mediocre
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the mediocre class
class
are
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is
very smaller than the rich
class
. If the price of tickets increases due to
rise
in tax,
then
it will not
effect
have an effect upon
affect
high
community but
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community, but
it can be effective in reducing
number
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the number
of travellers from mediocre families. Overall,
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in or at that place
there
would not be large difference seen. So,
this
resolution is not beneficial to limit the
number
of people travelling by
air
.
Nevertheless
, the funds collected by
money
due to increase in
prices
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the prices
of tickets and taxes on
air
tansport
move something or somebody around; usually over long distances
transport
can be used for welfare of folk and improvement of
environment
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the environment
.
This
money
should be given to scientists, so that they can research and invent eco-friendly fuels which can be used in
airplanes
, and
air
transportation
will become safe for
environment
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the environment
.
Moreover
,
this
money
can be used in planting
trees specially
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trees, especially
trees especially
near the airports as tees can absorb obnoxious gases and
also
reduce
noise
pollution
. Before putting my pen down, I concluded that levying
moe
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Moe
new
tax will not influence the growing demand for more flights, but it can be useful in reducing other
environment
issues like deforestation,
air
and
noise
pollution
.
to
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To
me,
this
method is not much effective. My reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs. Most of the passengers travelling by
air
means are rich or belongs to the high
community
. The
number
of individuals from the mediocre
class
is very smaller than the rich
class
. If the price of tickets increases due to
rise
in tax,
then
it will not affect high
community
, but it can be effective in reducing
number
Suggestion
the number
of travellers from mediocre families. Overall, there would not be large difference seen. So,
this
resolution is not beneficial to limit the
number
of people travelling by
air
.
Nevertheless
, the funds collected by
money
due to increase
price
Suggestion
the price
of tickets and taxes on
air
transport can be used for welfare of folk and improvement of
environment
Suggestion
the environment
.
This
money
should be given to scientists, so that they can research and invent eco-friendly fuels which can be used in
airplane
, and
air
transportation
will become safe for
environment
Suggestion
the environment
.
Moreover
,
this
money
can be used in planting trees, especially near the airports as tees can absorb obnoxious gases and
also
reduce
noise
pollution
. Before putting my pen down, I concluded that levying more taxes will not influence the growing demand for more flights, but it can be useful in reducing other
environment
issues like deforestation,
air
and
noise
pollution
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon footprint
  • environmental impact
  • economic activity
  • sustainable aviation technologies
  • alternative forms of transportation
  • sustainable travel behaviors
  • financial disincentives
  • public awareness campaigns
  • tourism-based economies
  • social equity
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