Air transport is increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to other countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. Some people say this is good other believe the use of air transport for this purpose is not justified. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, everywhere we can see some fruits and vegetables which are not available in many countries and use increasingly

air

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transports to

export

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these products. Many people say that it’s good while others say that it’s not justifiable. Despite these drawbacks, I believe that these products should be available for everyone. To outline the advantages of using

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transport to

export

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the fruits and vegetables we can say;

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of all,

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of these ingredients is really useful for local residents. Because it is beneficial to many farmers in the country to acquire their business. Thanks to

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, they will become independent.

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, since many citrus fruits come in, people's health has improved. Because fruits

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as kiwi, banana, orange are insanely rich in vitamins that are needed in our body.

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, transportation provides many people with work. As more countries

export

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fruits and vegetables, so more people are hired.

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, some people believe that using

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transports for

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purpose is not b

est idea.

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the best idea

There are several reasons for people's discontent.

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, the use of

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transport pollutes the

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and negatively affects the environment. It is really harmful to human life and health.

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econd reason

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The second reason

is that, for the

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of one flight of products, a large number of resources

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as energy, carbon dioxide, fuel, oil are used. In the end,

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will lead to poverty of the state at the expense of

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underground resources. To sum up,

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many people think that using

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vehicles for transportation is not g

ood idea,

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a good idea

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has some advantageous for many parts of the world.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

273 words

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Include an introduction and conclusion

You share your room with another studer in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he or She always has parties and friends visiting. write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the roommate.

It might be said that protecting the environment is the most important challenge facing governments today. How important do you feel this issue is? Are there other challenges which are of equal or greater importance?

Literature is deemed by many high school students to be a boring and unneccessary subject. Why is this in case? Is literature of any use to young people at all?

People in big cities are facing many health challenges due to a high level of air pollution. What causes air pollution in big cities? Can you suggest some ways to deal with this situation?

Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.