The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The presented bar chart compares the proportion of Australian genders who were busy

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doing physical exercises taking into account their ages

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2010. Looking at the chart, more males in their teenage

years

(15-24) tended to do

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activity than females who belonged to that age group which corresponded

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% and 47.7%, respectively.

On the other hand

, the ratio of males decreased gradually in mature periods. The figure changed

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% for

men

and 48.9%

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in their 25-34

years

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, it was 39.5% for

men

and 52.5% for

women

in their 35 to 44

years

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late adulthood period, the number of

men

increase and obviously, fewer

women

did

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activity. The figure stood at 43.1% for

men

and 53.3% for

women

in their 45-54

years

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and changed to 45.1% and 53% respectively in their 54-65

years

. It should be noted that the percentage of old ganders who did physical exercise nearly was the same

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for 46.7% and 47.1%. In conclusion, more

men

tended to do physical exercises than

women

in their teenage

years

. The proportion of

men

decreased in mature

years

, but it showed

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later

however

it was less than the percentage of

women

. Genders reached the same percentage in their old

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