The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007
This
line graph shows
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the United Kingdom,
Sweden
, Italy and Portugal the emission of carbon dioxide per person from 1967 to 2007. The United Kingdom and
Sweden
have a
decrease
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trend between 1967 and 2007 in total. The line of UK dropped gently in 40 years, but it
still
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the highest
one
in these four lines. The
number
of
Sweden
rose to 11 metric tonnes in 1977
then
decreased sharply to about 5 metric tonnes in 2007. What's more, it became the
third
one
at
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2007. There were two opposite lines which were Italy and Portugal, both of them grow noticeably from 1976 to 2007. The
number
of
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Italy was growing to 8 metric tonnes in 1997
then
keep steadily in
next
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ten years. As we can be seen in the graph, the
number
of Portugal
was
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increased dramatically from 1967 to 1997, but still the lowest
one
at
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2007. In summary, the trend of the carbon dioxide per person in the United Kingdom and
Sweden
was
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decreaesd
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decreased
deceased
and
the
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other two countries
were
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increased. The
number
of UK had been always the highest
one
and
the
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Portugal was the lowest
one
.

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