The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007

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the United Kingdom,

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, Italy and Portugal the emission of carbon dioxide per person from 1967 to 2007. The United Kingdom and

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have a

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trend between 1967 and 2007 in total. The line of UK dropped gently in 40 years, but it

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the highest

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in these four lines. The

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of

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rose to 11 metric tonnes in 1977

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decreased sharply to about 5 metric tonnes in 2007. What's more, it became the

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2007. There were two opposite lines which were Italy and Portugal, both of them grow noticeably from 1976 to 2007. The

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Italy was growing to 8 metric tonnes in 1997

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keep steadily in

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ten years. As we can be seen in the graph, the

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of Portugal

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increased dramatically from 1967 to 1997, but still the lowest

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2007. In summary, the trend of the carbon dioxide per person in the United Kingdom and

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decreaesd

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other two countries

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increased. The

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of UK had been always the highest

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Portugal was the lowest

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