Many People believe that having a fixed punishment for all crimes in efficient. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a fixed punishment.
This
day controlling crime
is a challenging issue. If one person commits c
rime
Suggestion
the crime, then
the crime then
a crime then
then
he should be punished, but fixed punishment
for all crimes is not moral. Let see the both advantages and disadvantages of having a fixed punishment
.
The advantages of having a fixed punishments create fear in society and motivate people to not commit crime
. For instance
road accidents, If people follow traffic rules properly, then
this
helps to reduce the accidents. S
econd biggest advantage
is managing courts and jails becomes easier. Along with that, people belong higher status in society can't escape from Suggestion
The second biggest advantage
punishment
. However
the official people have to do their work honestly.
Disadvantages of this
concept are mainly not providing justice for some kind of crimes. For example
, if a person attempts murder and crime
had been proved in court, but still the victim won't get accurate punishment
. At the same time the people who did crime
like theft or smuggling are not eligible to get the punishment
. However
this
problem can be solved be dividing the crimes into groups. For each group the severity of punishment
should be allocated. The lower level crimes allocated with less punishment
and this
will increase with the severity of c
rime.
To summarize all above points, even though Suggestion
the crime
this
concept creates fear in society and helps to reduce crime
, sometimes justice given to the guilty is not satisfied, maybe his punishment
was bigger or smaller. By creating groups that include all types of crimes helps to give justice which satisfies victims.Submitted by thanushnandan1998 on
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