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Many feel that students today should learn practical skills at school such as car maintenance and managing a bank account. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is often said that current learning curriculum of high schools should be equipped with day to day practical activities like troubleshooting a car failure and filling bank forms, so that pupils can get acquainted with real
life
 situations at their early age. I firmly believe that these skills are mandatory in their academic syllabus in order to make their
life
 a smooth sailing. Most of the parents nowadays realized the criticality of daily
life
 skills subjects in their children's learning system, so that they need to worry about getting daily routine things done when the situation arises. Some of them went a step ahead and made sure that their minors are getting enrolled
to
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in
 these subjects.
For example
, according to the recent education report tabled by the education ministry reveals the facts that student enrolment to plumbing and mechanical classes at
primary level
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the primary level
 have seen a spike when compared to compared to the earlier academic years.
In addition
 to
this
, if a person is well versed in fixing minor repairs of household appliances on his own, he
do not need
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does not need
 to spend hefty amount in the form of maintenance and overhauling charges as these are getting increased over a period of time.
Furthermore
, one does not have to wait for service personnel to fix any of these issues which in turn saves the valuable time as well. To summarize, learning
of
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by
from
do
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doing
 it yourself skills are essential to any student in order to lead a less dependent
life
 and
also
 to restrict themselves on spending various service bills, which in turn gets converted into huge saving in the long run.

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