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You are about to go on vacation for a month. A friend from another town will come and stay in your apartment. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: explain where your friend can get the key to the apartment give your friend some instruction about using your apartment recommend some places to go

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Dear Nina, I am very happy about your stay in my
apartment
. I so missed you but I do not live in the city. I have a plan for my family. We are celebrating my father's birthday and you know my family live so far from me. We decided I use an annual leave for one month and I really miss you , my family. We may go to Germany and Italy. We do not decide vocation
this
 is a very surprise for us. You should stay in my
apartment
 because my
apartment
 is very close to the city centre and it the near all the local markets. I will leave the key to
neighbour
Correct article usage
the neighbour
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. She lives in my opposite flat. She does not work outside she works home office and she always stays in the
apartment
. I want you to your comfortable so ıf you do not find anything please call me. best regards.
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph has a single focus to improve clarity.
coherence cohesion
Check for consistent verb tenses to enhance the logical structure.
task achievement
The letter has a warm and friendly tone, appropriate for a letter to a friend.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing contribute to a well-rounded letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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