A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties

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Dear Dave,
Firstly
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, thank you for agreeing to look after my
house
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and
pet
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while I am away. I owe you one. I am writing
this
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letter for listing my contact details, describing household duties, and instructions for caring
my
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for my
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pet
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, while I am away. I will be visiting my parent's home in Hyderabad. During
this
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time, my cellphone will be unreachable. For any emergency, please contact me at +91-40-858585859. I will have access to the internet, and for any non-emergency purposes you can email me at [email protected] Adriane, my dog is less demanding than other pets that I have seen. There are three bowls placed near the
pet
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house
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; every morning please fill them up with the
pet
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food placed
in
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on
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the black shelf
next
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to the
pet
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house
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. Left to the bowls, there is a water jar that needs to be refilled every day.
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, please check the temperature of the dog
everyday
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. If it is too high, please contact me. The
house
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is mopped and cleaned by the
robot
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. Every week, please fill the
robot
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's tank with
the
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water, the tap and pipe are
next
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to the
robot
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's dock. The
robot
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will blink red if
it's
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its
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filters are jammed. Follow the instructions attached with
this
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letter to clear the jam. Again, thank you so much for taking
this
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up. I'll see you soon after my holiday. Best wishes, Sashank.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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