some people think that advertisement are good for the society whereas other oppose the view discuss both view and give your opinion

In competitive era, in advertisement has become a virtual sources to introducing upcoming products. Some people argue that it brings a negative effect impact on
children
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child's
parents and market, while others and I believe that it have a
more benefits
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more beneficial
more benefit
compare
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compared
to the drawback as it has created employment and awareness. One more hand,
it
it is
it's
attractive
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attracting
people for
impulsuve
proceeding from natural feeling or impulse without external stimulus
impulsive
buying by providing different promotional offers
that is
why
instead
of saving money might be
spend
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spent
on purchasing unnecessary goods.
For example
, in the season of the big billion
day
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days
on Flipkart which has continuously given large number of
discount
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discounts
on a variant things which is why people would purchase on unusual things.
Consequently
, people are misguided and cheated by
such
marketing tricks.
Moreover
, it only highlights the positive characteristic of products and tries to hide its negative impact.
However
, I reiterate that an advertisement has brought
revelouation
a drastic and far-reaching change in ways of thinking and behaving
revolution
evaluation
in marketing strategies, it is
effective way
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an effective way
of the spreading of awareness and creating an employment among people about the use of new and existing
product
.
For instance
,
Accept space
,
Patanjali, world largest herbal
product
company, has introduced organic
product
which
are
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is
healthier for human beings.
Furthermore
, an advertising help in educating the society about the various health and safety issues, it is the best way to rise the demanding of the
product
. To
conclusion
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conclude
, advertising have a more benefits compare to their negative impacts,
although
sometime
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
people might be cheated by
lucrative profile
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a lucrative profile
of higher status brands.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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