Some people think that testing on animals is necessary for discovering medicine that helps fight diseases, while others believe it is not necessary to test on animals for this reason. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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With growing population and changes in the environment, there is increase of diseases, and scientist discovers different types of antidotes, but due to not test on human after discovering of

medicine

and avoid any

side

effects it is being tested on animals

first

. While others think it is not necessary to test them on animals. So on

this

topic we will give a big picture and discuss about both sides. Well to start with, on one hand it is the best way to test any new found medicines on animals 1st

then

trying on human as we can understand how the

medicine

will react in a

body

and what

side

effects it can cause before trying on peoples as it is very risk and even life threatening for human life. While

on the other hand

, it is not for sure that all the tests which will be done on animals and what result we get to them we might get same on the human

body

. As human

body

is different from animals.

For example

, maybe some

medicine

, which is tested on animals are strong, but in the human

body

, it Might even take someones life or that antidote might be right when tested on animals, but when consumed by human it might have different

side

effects which might not be found while testing in animals. In conclusion, in my opinion testing on animals can lead to the discovery of a new

medicine

which can save many lives, but we should not neglect its other

side

too, we should see that it works the same way and founds the correct results.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Ethical dilemmas
Medical breakthroughs
In vitro (test tube) experiments
Alternatives to animal testing
Clinical trials
Vivisection
Biomedical research
Animal welfare/rights
Cross-species extrapolation
Compassionate use
Cruelty-free practices
Suffering alleviation
Genetic engineering
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