Throughout history, people have dreamed of living perfect society,but they have not agreed on what an ideal society would be like.What do you think is most important element of a perfect in the modern world? How can people work towards achieving an ideal society?

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each other
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • equality
  • inclusivity
  • socioeconomic status
  • empowers
  • critical thinking
  • innovative solutions
  • legal system
  • justice
  • environmental sustainability
  • sustainable living
  • civic engagement
  • governance
  • address the needs
  • effective
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