In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals as food or other products, such as medicines and clothing. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there is a significant number of products made from

animals

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like food or clothes can be replaced by other modern

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.

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argue that we still need animal products to some extent. On the one hand, it is morally wrong to cause

animals

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to suffer.

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with,

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are used to be the major sources of materials to produce

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outfit

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, until now some wealthy people in many developed countries still use

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of

animals

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for making their clothes.

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,

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is the modern century, so there are a huge of materials

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replace the

animals

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’ skin.

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,

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meat like

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chickens

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,

beefs

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,

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can

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by

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plant

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and

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. It provides sufficient nutrients for our body and can

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help us prevent

from

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a substantial number of problems

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as

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high blood pressure,

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and cardiovascular

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and

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good for our eyes.

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, carrot contains a lot of vitamin A and can prevent people from myopia.

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, animal testing has played an essential role in the medical

fields

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. With the development of technology, we can replace animal

experiment

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with

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computer programs that could provide a significant number of results.

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,

finished

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drug must be inspected by testing

animals

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like hamsters before giving to patients for safety.

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, animal testing has so far saved many patients the virus diseases by finding suitable vaccines.

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, people should stop experimenting on

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animal

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and find some other new medicals by technology.