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Some people that the universities should provide graduates knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others, think that the true function of universities should give access to knowledge to its own shake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

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In the
last
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 few decades, there has been a significant growth in the field of education. Now, most of the governments have changed their education system in order to provide more leaders and professionals with more practical
knowledge
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.School and colleges in most of the countries are offering variety of courses to the students depending upon their interest and the type of profession, they want to choose for themselves. Graduates with skills and
knowledge
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, which is required to
work
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 effectively in the workplace of
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company
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the company
companies
 are likely to get hired easily than the graduates, who does not have those credentials.Most of the employers prefer an experienced employee than a fresher in their
company
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 due to the skills he developed during the time in his previous
company
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 so that he could
work
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 more effectively than a fresher in the same workplace. Universities should give
knowledge
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 and skills to their students, which is required by the employers, which could help the students in hiring by a
company
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. In India, many colleges of automobile engineering give only specific
knowledge
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 and skills required by an automobile employer resulting in a higher success rate of the students from those colleges. Professionals, who was involved in other extra curricular activities and studied other subjects
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 in their college regardless of their
work
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 are likely to be more successful and effective balance their
work
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 with personal
life
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.Universities and colleges should give access to the
knowledge
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 of different subjects to the students by which they could develop their mental strength and
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 being set an example of decent human being in the society.
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, my batch mates in the college, who were good in the study as well as in sports are more successful and more happy with their
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 than the other students of my class. Colleges and universities should nourish students with skills and
knowledge
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, which is required in their professions as well as in their social
life
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. People should be able to manage their personal
life
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 with their
work
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, which lead to a healthier society.
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