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write a paragraph about the person you would like to become

#paragraph #person
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Steve Jobs has a saying: Your time is limited, so don't waste it living someone else's life.
This
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 statement is very true and it motivates me in difficult times. And I am sure that all of us have our own dreams, no matter how big or small, I hope you always remember them and keep them. If your wishes are
to go
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going
 abroad, explore the world, or become an international citizen,
then
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 you will not be without English-the language of the whole world.
and
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And
my
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 wish
too
in the direction of
to
 to be an English translator. Start fulfilling your dreams today, starting small things, starting with learning English, learning steadily and consistently every day.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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