In the past, shopping was routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hoppy.

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no doubts that these days shopping is very important in our life becoming very popular.

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the question it is considered one of the most controversial issues today in

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essay I am going to examine

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phenomenon from both viewpoints. On one side of the argument there are people who argue that the benefit considerably outweigh the disadvantage for believing

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is many people when they go to shopping they feel very happy and now they regard shopping

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enjoying or showing or marked by joy or pleasure

happy

in our life. Children,

for example

, they consider shopping routine and they want to go shopping every day.

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possible to say that some people they go shopping every day in order to buy their needs and

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thus

consider

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enjoying or showing or marked by joy or pleasure

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possible to consider it with the opposing case. It is often argued that in facts people who they consider shopping is

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happily

always find them end the month don’t have money because they go shopping

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every day

every day day

. Often people have

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the people who they regard go shopping

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enjoying or showing or marked by joy or pleasure

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balance.

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, I tend to believe that people who consider shopping routine these people find them, they have much money and most time they haven’t worked.

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