What are the advantages and disadvantages of working from home?

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As the world around us is constantly changing, so is the mode of working. Apart from

traditional working model

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the traditional working model

, these days people have

option

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an option

of working from the comfort of their own house. There are both advantages and disadvantages of the same which will be described in the following paragraphs.

To begin

with, working from

home

has numerous advantages. As our world is experiencing technological revolution

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so is our work environment. Most of the task is performed on computer from power point presentations to designing which can be easily carried out on

personal computer

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a personal computer

personal computers

home

This

allows people to avoid unnecessary waste of

time

in commuting, provides flexible working hours and quality

time

can be

spend

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spent

with family members.

Moreover

, a person can savour

home

cooked meals rather than depending on outside unhealthy food.

Although

this

has several disadvantages as well. As a person is working from

home

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he or she is alone.

This

can be a major cause of decreased productivity and creativity. One can become lazy due to the extreme level of convenience as the person does not have to travel

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can function according to his or her

time

and can even take the family for granted.

Moreover

, eating at

home

daily without the company of

friend

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friends

a friend

and happy conversations can make each growing day boring and dull. Having said all that I would like to argue that, there should be

fine balance

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a fine balance

between working from

home

and office. Office space should be designed in

such

a way that they become more and more comfortable for the employees. Working from

home

option can be provided for

few times

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a few times

a month in order to benefit from it. With

this

I would like to conclude that, people need to resign the work environment. There should be a perfect combination of work and

home

environment

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This

should be done keeping in mind the long commute hours, family

time

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creativity as well as physical health of the employee.

Fri Mar 27 2020

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Remote work
Telecommuting
Home office
Flexible schedule
Productivity
Cost-effective
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Burnout
Work-life balance
Technical disruptions
Commuting
Distractions
Connectivity
Collaboration
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