The first car appeared on British road in 1988. By the year 2000 there maybe as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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“Look what you’re doing. You’re fighting over
tissues
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the tissues
!”
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of on-going corona virus pandemic outbreak over the
world
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, humans have to suffer from the
panic
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buying
begotten
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panic
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buying. It is easy to get numerously recent news about intense fighting among people to grab essential goods, especially tissues/
toilet
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paper
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, the indispensable and coveted
household
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item
besides
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masks and hand sanitizer among corona
panic
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. “Retailers in the US and Canada have started limiting the number of
toilet
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paper
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packs customers can buy in one trip. Some supermarkets in the UK are sold out. Grocery stores in Australia have hired security guards to patrol customers”, said Scottie Andrew, CNN. Are people still going to fight to grab
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tissue
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a tissue
for using during
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panic
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when they are buying up more quickly than tissues can be restocked? Alternatively, bidets are
the greatest
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the great
choice ever at
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time. It is now generally agreed that people worldwide should
use
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bidet sprayer
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a bidet sprayer
or
bidet
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to clean their posterior after defecation because it considerably minimizes long-term damage to the global
environment
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, reduces annual costs of buying
toilet
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paper
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and provides important
health
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benefits.
Toilet
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paper
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: Stressful on the global
environment
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It is apparently that
bidet
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sprayer or
bidet
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is considered as a key of green apparatus in that using any kinds of
bidet
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can save not only the old-growth forest but
also
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other natural resources including
water
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, fuel and electricity.
In particular
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, the environmental effects of
toilet
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tissue
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get even worse when we look at how wasteful process to manufacture
toilet
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paper
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is. As can be seen from the image above,
tissue
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products
such
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as
toilet
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paper
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,
paper
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towels and facial tissues are made from wood pulp, which directly leads to widespread deforestation around the
world
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. Apparently, the Natural Resources
Defense
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Defence
Council (NRDC),
international nonprofit environmental organization
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an international nonprofit environmental organization
the international nonprofit environmental organization
that cooperated on the study released that the majority of these raw materials, which are trees, are derived from Canada’s boreal forests. Indeed, according to
World
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Wildlife Fund (WWF), the planet witnessed approximately 270,000 trees a day effectively ripped from the ground with
toilet
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paper
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or ended up as trash all over the
world
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.
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, a variety of other natural resources are
also
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involved in the shockingly wasteful process to manufacture
toilet
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paper
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everyday
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every day
. In fact, Scientific American stated “Americans
use
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36.5
billion
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rolls of
toilet
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paper
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every
year
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, representing the pulping of some 15 million trees.
This
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also
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involves 473,587,500,000 gallons of
water
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to produce the
paper
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and 253,000 tons of chlorine for bleaching. ”
Moreover
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,
electricity
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the electricity
required for manufacturing
are
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is
nearly 17.3
terawatts
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annually and that significant amounts of energy and materials are used in packaging and in transportation to retail outlets. Interestingly, to those who said bidets waste
water
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, in fact, the standard flow rate for a
bidet
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is about 0.5
liters
a metric unit of capacity, formerly defined as the volume of one kilogram of pure water under standard conditions; now equal to 1,000 cubic centimeters (or approximately 1.75 pints)
litres
litters
– per – minute of
water
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, or
in other words
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, an about eight of a gallon per
use
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.
Therefore
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, in comparison with manufacturing
tissue
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, switching to
use
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bidets
instead
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is a better solution to save
water
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resources from
drain
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drainage
and pollution.
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,
this
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massive devastation and needless waste drives the Earth in the fight against climate change.
Toilet
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Paper
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: Stressful on annual
household
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Expenditure As has been mentioned above, reducing annual costs on
toilet
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paper
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consumption is the
second
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advantage of using bidets for long-term.
For instance
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,
this
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research
paper
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is targeted toward The United States (the U.S.)
which
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Which
spends more than $15.6
billion
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a
year
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on tissues (including
toilet
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paper
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) – more than any nation in the
world
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(the figure is shown below). Estimates from the Statista Consumer Market Outlook show that the United States leads the
world
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in
toilet
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paper
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consumption at the average of $120
billion
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dollars per consumer unit/or a
household
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per
year
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. A report, published by U.S. Bureau of
Labor
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Labour
Statistics (BLS), released the number of consumer unit (CU) in
U
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the U
.S.
was
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Was
about 130,000. To enumerate, in that case, the calculation of 130,000 CU/
household
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in the U.S.
to
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To
multiply with the average of $120
billion
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dollars per CU is nearly $15.6
billion
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dollars, which means
this
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whole country spends $15.6
billion
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dollars each
year
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on tissues, what a huge expense! Ironically, the estimate is just for expenditure from 2014 to 2017. Undoubtedly,
this
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number tends to rise significantly in 2020
as a result
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of growing population, inflation and even on-going corona virus pandemic outbreak.
Consequently
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, the author of Today I Found Out E-newspaper revealed that for reference as to the expense, San Francisco, the 15th most populous city in the U.S., spent about 4 million dollars annually on cleaning out
fatbergs
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and fixing clogged
toilet
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or even clogged public sewer systems. Alternatively, the Americans can buy one kind of bidets
such
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as
bidet
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sprayer, which is quite cheap (starting at around $25 dollars for a basic model) and ridiculously able to install.
Toilet
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Paper
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: Stressful on
human’s
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human
health
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Last
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but not least, it is clear that bidets are
more comfort
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more comfy
more comfortable
, sanitary and greater hygienic. Particularly,
this
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added factor preventing from abrasion is extremely beneficial to people suffering from a sensitive underside
such
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as rash or some
health
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problems as
hemorrhoids
pain caused by venous swelling at or inside the anal sphincter
haemorrhoids
haemorrhoids'
haemorrhoid's
, anal fissures and urinary tract infections, said experts. In detail, it is no doubt that converting to bidets improves cleanliness and sanitariness in that it prevents the serious attack by bacteria or virus through
process
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the process
a process
of wiping with tissues. And, aggressive wiping can
causes
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cause
painful and fissures, which takes 2 to 3 months to heal and even
hemorrhoids
pain caused by venous swelling at or inside the anal sphincter
haemorrhoids
haemorrhoids'
haemorrhoid's
. To conclude, the evidences show how
tissues destroy
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tissues, destroy
natural
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the natural environment
environment
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and human’s life in a rough way.
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, using bidets is an environmentally friendly, economical and healthy selection. It is time to make the switch from wiping to washing for both our own
health
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and the
health
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of the
environment
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. Let’s remember
together how
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together, how
you will feel good about the environmental advantages of bidets, your wallet will feel better about buying fewer dead trees and
finally
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your butt will feel very strongly satisfied without dry
toilet
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paper
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.

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